Saturday, February 6, 2010

Don't Laugh!

Okay, here's a poem I just came up with after making the noodles to my dad's beef Ramen soup, while shredding the pepper jack cheese and sprinkling the pepper onto the soggy, wet noodles. :P (no, I do not eat it like that... yuck! Plus, my fav is chicken! ;)

You rest upon my face, making your presence known.
I bundle up to see you, so you won't be alone.
You always make me smile, and laugh when I'm with you.
If only you could stay a while and make my nose turn blue.
As you gently leave my presence, I whisper my goodbye.
"I'll come again next winter," your humble, sweet reply.
(this would be the point when I would insert a picture of falling snow... ;)

It didn't snow much this Winter, just once, and it didn't stay long. I was gazing out the window while making the interesting Ramen my dad so dearly loves and thinking about the time I stood out on our porch, dancing in the snow... barefoot. Yes, I know, I am crazy, but it was fun! You should try it sometime! Just make sure you don't stick your feet in hot water afterwards, they start doing... weird things... lol =D Anyway, so that's why I started thinking up this... "poem". I was very surprised, and proud of myself for thinking this up. Normally I come up with two lines and they sound unreasonably stupid, but this time it just came to me. Maybe it was the pepper jack cheese. Maybe it was the pepper. Maybe it was the noodles (lol). Even so, I made it up and am very pleased. Though, I don't know why I would want my nose to turn blue... :P

~Eldarwen Failariel~

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Johanna said...

That is very good!

samarah said...

that is a great poem, Eldarwen! I love it! Sometimes I get inspired and I'll write a really good poem ( but i haven't been in a while ;) a year or 2 ago I wrote a poem for each of the seasons, maybe I post them on my blog sometime :)
I'm so glad to hear that your dad is doing well :)


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Jessica Faith said...

nice poem!! :)

Lindsay said...

That's a nice poem, Eldarwen! And I know what you mean... I like the chicken flavor better too, but my mom and sisters prefer the beef. :P I hope you're having a great weekend! :)

~ Love,

Eldarwen said...

*Narthea responding for Eldarwen, as Eldarwen would respond* LOL

(Mwaaaa!! :D She does know I'm doing this! She's busy with laundry at the moment. :)


Thanks!! I'm glad you like the poem. :) I'll be sure to check out the award soon!

Thank you! ...I'd love to hear the poems you've written! :)

Thanks a bunch!

Thank you! I know... isn't the chicken flavor really good?! (I (Narthea) like it too! ;) Hope you're having a great weekend as well!


~ "Eldarwen Failariel" ~


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Living4Jesus said...

That's a sweet poem Eldarwen. :) You should write them more often....:D


Milli said...

Great poem!

Eldarwen said...

Thanks Everyone!
Narthea, you are silly!
Cornet Crazie, I will! ;) I think I know what it is... eek!

Nana said...

Great poem. No, I did not laugh. We have had tons and tons of snow this winter. We are under two feet at the moment and have more coming on Tuesday. Loving it!

Eldarwen said...

Nana, we just got snow on Thursday... and 6 inches of it! =D Thanks for sharing it with us. ;)